From 8c4190ebd4bf2f7468caa716fdb38d6459af3490 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: flisk <pfg0n9ey@flisk.xyz>
Date: Mon, 5 Jun 2023 23:06:22 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] rewrite and amend some stuff

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 docs/caravans.md | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/caravans.md b/docs/caravans.md
index 9ff6187..1c3d95f 100644
--- a/docs/caravans.md
+++ b/docs/caravans.md
@@ -4,22 +4,22 @@ As with previous iterations of CCCamp, you will be able to purchase a *caravan t
 
 If you're planning to attend CCCamp with a caravan, please keep the following in mind:
 
-* You will need a caravan ticket
+* Parking a caravan at CCCamp *requires a caravan ticket*
 * Please bring a 2 kg fire extinguisher
 
 ## Infrastructure
 
-Please note that preparations are still ongoing, and we can't give guarantees for some things at this time.
+Note that preparations are still ongoing. Information is provided as accurately as possible, but without guarantees.
 
 * There **won't** be water or sewage connections
-* There *might* be a power hookup
+* There *might* be power connections
 * There will *most probably* be network hubs
 
 ## Locations
 
-A designated area adjacent to the campground will be available for your caravan. This is the largest and most accessible location. If you park here, you will be able to move your vehicle during the event.
+A parking area adjacent to the campground will be available for your caravan. This is the largest and most accessible location. If you park here, you will be able to move your vehicle during the event.
 
-Trucks, caravans and campervans will generally not be allowed on the campground. If you think your vehicle is absolutely indispensable for your village, please contact the village orga.
+Trucks, caravans and campervans will generally not be allowed on the campground. However: if you think your vehicle is absolutely indispensable for your village, please contact the village orga, but **keep in mind that vehicles parked on the campground will have to remain there for the duration of the event**. Please use the normal parking area if this is not acceptable.
 
 ## On Arrival
 
@@ -27,4 +27,4 @@ Trucks, caravans and campervans will generally not be allowed on the campground.
 
 ## Contact Us
 
-If you have any questions, please contact the caravan team via e-mail: *todo*
+If you have any questions, please contact the caravan team via e-mail: [camp2023-caravan@cccv.de](mailto:camp2023-caravan@cccv.de)
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