Updates and editing of network info pages

This hopefully makes the network info a bit clearer!

docs/facilities.md

@@ -135,24 +135,22 @@ How to contact you.
 [#retronetworking](https://web.libera.chat/#retronetworking) IRC channel on libera.chat or [e-mail](mailto:c3isdn@osmocom.org).
 
 
-
 ## Network
 
-As usual there will be wired and wireless connectivity avaible.
-See [Network](network.md) for more information.
+As usual there will be wired and wireless connectivity available. See [Network](network.md) for more information.
 
 ### Wired
 
-see [Network#wired](network.md#wired)
+see [Network#wired](network.md#wired).
 
-### Wifi
+### WiFi
 
-The following SSIDs are provided: 
+The following wireless networks are provided: 
 
- * Camp2023 (WPA2 802.1X (username: camp / password: camp), 2.4GHz+5GHz) ✅ noc recommended ✅
- * Camp2023-open (open/OWE, 2.4GHz+5GHz)
+ * `Camp2023` (Username: camp / Password: camp) ✅ NOC recommended ✅
+ * `Camp2023-open` (open, may be insecure)
 
-see [Network#wireless](network.md#wireless)
+For more information about configuring your WiFi device securely, see [Network#wireless](network.md#wireless).
 
 
 ## Power