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--- a/README.md
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-# 37C3 info pages
+# 37C3 Info Pages

 This repository contains the source code for the 37C3 info pages. The pages are
 available at https://events.ccc.de/congress/2023/infos/.

--- a/docs/index.md
+++ b/docs/index.md
@@ -5,16 +5,16 @@ title: 37th Chaos Communication Congress

 The 37th Chaos Communication Congress (37C3) takes place in Hamburg, 27.-30.12.2023, and is the 2023 edition of the annual four-day conference on technology, society and utopia organised by the [Chaos Computer Club (CCC)](https://www.ccc.de/) and volunteers.

-The Congress offers lectures and workshops and various events on a multitude of topics including (but not limited to) information technology and generally a critical-creative attitude towards technology and the discussion about the effects of technological advances on society.
+Congress offers lectures and workshops and various events on a multitude of topics including (but not limited to) information technology and generally a critical-creative attitude towards technology and the discussion about the effects of technological advances on society.

-For 37 years, the congress has been organized by the community and appreciates all kinds of participation. You are encouraged to contribute by volunteering, setting up and hosting hands-on and self-organized events with the other components of your assembly or presenting your own projects to fellow hackers. 
+For 37 years, Congress has been organized by the community and appreciates all kinds of participation. You are encouraged to contribute by volunteering, setting up and hosting hands-on and self-organized events with the other components of your assembly or presenting your own projects to fellow hackers. 

 ## Information Channels

 ### Info Pages

 That’s the site you are currently reading. We want to publish all relevant information in short and condensed form here.
-The pages will be updated as soon as new information becomes available or when information changes, they serve as the single source of truth regarding information about the congress.
+The pages will be updated as soon as new information becomes available or when information changes, they serve as the single source of truth regarding information about Congress.

 ### Event Blog


--- a/docs/mentors.md
+++ b/docs/mentors.md
 # Chaos Mentors / Chaospat:innen

-We are the Chaos mentors. We team up mentors and people visiting the congress for the very first time. We thereby seek to diversify the crowd at congress, encourage people that usually wouldn't attend and supporting people with special needs.
+We, the Chaos Mentors, match mentors with people visiting Congress for the very first time. We thereby seek to diversify the crowd at Congress, encourage people that usually would not attend and support people with special needs.

 ### Why are we doing this?
-We ourselves have had a great time at the Congress for 1, 2, 10, or 30 years. But we know from our own experience how difficult the first step can be – many Chaosmentors were Chaosmentees at their first Congress. Thoughts like “A big hacker conference, do I even belong here?” are not foreign to us. But do not worry – once the first step is done, great people and the opportunity to learn a lot about yourself await. But the exchange is not a one-way street: the community at the Congress can learn a lot from you as well and thrives from the diversity of the participants. That’s why we want to encourage those who would otherwise hesitate to come without the Chaospatinnen. We focus on people who are not part of the mainly represented group cis, male and white. Of course, we will not exclude anyone.

-### For chaos mentors
+We ourselves have had a great time at Congress for 1, 2, 10, or 30 years. But we know from our own experience how difficult the first step can be — many Chaos Mentors were Chaos Mentees at their first Congress. Thoughts like “A big hacker conference, do I even belong here?” are not foreign to us. But do not worry, once the first step is done, great people and the opportunity to learn a lot about yourself await. But the exchange is not a one-way street: The community at Congress can learn a lot from you as well and thrives from the diversity of the participants. That’s why we want to encourage those who would otherwise hesitate to come without Chaos Mentors. We focus on people who are not part of the main group represented: cis, male and white.

-Of course, we are again looking for the enthusiastic support from friendly, experienced, and reliable mentors this year. If you feel like taking on a group of newbies and looking after them, please register as a mentor. Thank you in advance for your support.
+Of course, we will not exclude anyone.
+
+### Looking For Chaos Mentors
+
+Of course, this year we are again looking for the enthusiastic support from friendly, experienced, and reliable mentors. If you feel like taking on a group of newbies and looking after them, please register as a mentor. Thank you in advance for your support.

--- a/docs/participate.md
+++ b/docs/participate.md
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ See [Call for Participation](https://www.ccc.de/en/updates/2023/37C3-CfP) for de
 ## Call for Assemblies

 Want to build and inhabit your own space with a group of friends? Register your assembly!
-Please bring all your blinking stuff, cool projects and everything else you think might be a great addition to the congress!
+Please bring all your blinking stuff, cool projects and everything else you think might be a great addition to Congress!

 Read the [Call for Assemblies]() [TODO, does not yet exist] for more details.


--- a/docs/tickets.md
+++ b/docs/tickets.md
 # Tickets

-Tickets will be available for online presale (no local sales) at [tickets.events.ccc.de](https://tickets.events.ccc.de).
+Tickets will be available for online presale (no local sale) at [tickets.events.ccc.de](https://tickets.events.ccc.de).
 If you have questions or need help, please contact us [via email](mailto:37c3-tickets@cccv.de).

-## Presale dates
+## Presale Dates

 TBA

-## Ticket prices
+## Ticket Prices

 TBA

-## Presale phases
+## Presale Phases

-The presale will have two phases. If you'd like to learn more about why we run our presale this way, head over [to our
+The presale will have two phases. If you would like to learn more about why we run our presale this way, head over [to our
 blog post](https://events.ccc.de/2023/10/11/37c3-presale-modus-operandi/#37c3-presale-modus-operandi-english).

-### Community phase
+### Community Phase

 From TBA till TBA (dates to be announced at [events.ccc.de](https://events.ccc.de)), tickets will be available for sale
 for community members with a voucher code. Vouchers will be given to

 - **Angels** (volunteers) who worked 20 hours or more during 36C3. Angels will receive **two** vouchers per person.
-  These vouchers guarantee one ticket per voucher for the full duration of the Community phase.
+  Those vouchers guarantee one ticket per voucher for the full duration of the Community phase.
 - **Speakers** at 36C3. Speakers will also receive **two** vouchers per person. These vouchers guarantee one ticket per
  voucher for the full duration of the Community phase.
 - **Groups** that are part of the Chaos community (registration deadline 2023-10-25). Groups will receive **one**
  voucher that can be redeemed multiple times (up to an upper limit depending on the group). These vouchers do **not**
  guarantee any tickets. Instead, they give access to the two presale dates that take place during the Community phase.

-### Public phase
+### Public Phase

-In the public presale phase, there will be another two presale dates. These dates are open to everybody and do not
-require a voucher code. The dates will be announced at [events.ccc.de](https://events.ccc.de).
+In the public presale phase, there will be another two presale dates.
+
+Those dates will be open to everybody and do not require a voucher code. The dates will be announced at [events.ccc.de](https://events.ccc.de).

 Please note that experience shows that you will need to be very punctual (think seconds, not minutes) to buy a ticket
 during the open phase.
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@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
                <div class="card mb-4 box-shadow">
                  <img class="card-img-top" data-src="holder.js/100px175?theme=industrial&size=24&text=Info Pages" alt="Card image cap">
                  <div class="card-body">
-                    <p class="card-text">The info pages are the main source for all information around congress</p>
+                    <p class="card-text">The info pages are the main source for all information around Congress</p>
                  </div>
                </div>
              </a>
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
                <div class="card mb-4 box-shadow">
                  <img class="card-img-top" data-src="holder.js/100px175?theme=industrial&size=24&text=Eventblog" alt="Card image cap">
                  <div class="card-body">
-                    <p class="card-text">Announcements and updates around congress and our other events</p>
+                    <p class="card-text">Announcements and updates around Congress and our other events</p>
                  </div>
                </div>
              </a>
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
                <div class="card mb-4 box-shadow">
                  <img class="card-img-top" data-src="holder.js/100px175?theme=industrial&size=24&text=Recordings" alt="Card image cap">
                  <div class="card-body">
-                    <p class="card-text">Recordings from older events, not only congress</p>
+                    <p class="card-text">Recordings from older events, not only Congress</p>
                  </div>
                </div>
              </a>